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Hotfix - Thick Skinned/Lucidity
Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 7:41 am
by hotfix
Soundcloud
Thick Skinned- Dubstep song
Soundcloud
Lucidity- Hip hop jazz dubsteppy experiment
I'm looking for constructive criticism! and as a sidenote, I'm looking for someone reliable to collab with.
Re: Hotfix-2 New Chunes
Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 8:15 am
by Sonic Arts
Thick skinned:
Generic snare. Nice intro though, and the bass is pretty interesting. Cool wormy synth around 1:50 and 2:20 too. Nice chord progression, but maybe stick another section in with a different progression to mix it up. Just a thought.
Lucidity:
During the intro, the bass line is too boring to stand out that much in the mix. Maybe start it out softer and bring it up when the song hits the peak. And around 2:05 it sounds like the piano is hitting some wrong notes. It happens throughout the song whenever the piano hits those chords. Not sure if that's intentional or not. Awesome sax though, pretty creative. Good vibes on this one man. Nice work.
Re: Hotfix-2 New Chunes
Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2011 7:56 am
by Be-1ne
Please read this thread, and format the title of your post correctly - viewtopic.php?f=23&t=214035