Asetik - Just Do It
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 5:01 pm
Drum patterns need more variation, could do with some effects on the perc, stuff like more verb on the snare/clap and more eq'ing to the kick.
Bass is to simple and not low enough. Take it down to, at the least, c3 and tweak your oscillators so they don't sound too syncopated. Add some other elements to add interest and make it progressive. Once you have done that I reckon you'd be well on your way to producing better music.