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Triphosphate - Gamma Wave (Drumstep)

Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 5:22 am
by Triphosphate
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Free D/L. Any feedback is welcome and greatly appreciated, and will be returned in kind.

Song updated: 10/10/2011
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Re: Triphosphate - Gamma Wave (Drumstep)

Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 11:41 pm
by asetik
This track is tight man, it sounds twice as good as mine (plus Hulk FX=awesome)! I just wish I knew enough about music production to offer some useful advice. Thanks for the feedback. Beginner's luck I guess...

Re: Triphosphate - Gamma Wave (Drumstep)

Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 11:53 pm
by Gigabaros
I really dig the transitions and the harmonies are great as well. It all sounds very musical! I just wish there was some more sparkle and depth to the mix. And the, really awesome hulk samples could be a bit more in the mix. I haven't dealt any with vocals though, so i don't know how to go about doing that. :4:

Re: Triphosphate - Gamma Wave (Drumstep)

Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:29 am
by Triphosphate
Thanks for the feedback guys. I think I got a little over zealous with making sure the hulk samples were audible. And as far as the sparkle, I totally agree, I'm thinking of boosting the high end of the wobbles, perhaps isolating the high ends and compress and boost a bit. Possibly with the synths too. I can't get away with boosting the high end on the whole track cause of those deliciously resonant hats. Lol. Thanks a ton for the advice and thoughts, I'm probably going to mix this a little better tonight.

Re: Triphosphate - Gamma Wave (Drumstep)

Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 5:14 am
by NiBirucollision
]tiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight as shit man--- dang,some fat break beats- like legit really sick, felt everynote man flawless----check my tracks if u got the time--im new as shit still but hope u njoy any feedback is appreciated

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Re: Triphosphate - Gamma Wave (Drumstep)

Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 5:55 am
by Triphosphate
Thanks a bunch for the feedback I really appreciate it. Checked out a couple of your tracks man, they totally seem like something for a horror flick, very appropriate.

Re: Triphosphate - Gamma Wave (Drumstep)

Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 7:46 am
by Triphosphate
Had another crack at it with fresh ears and a couple new ideas, you should enjoy clearer sounding more varied wobbles, including our old time favorite: triplets. Enjoy the smooth taste of crispier highs, and more potent punches. Oh, put his vocals more in the mix as well.

Thanks for the feedback guys
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Re: Triphosphate - Gamma Wave (Drumstep)

Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:31 am
by Triphosphate
I try not to do this without updating the song but... Bump! <3

Re: Triphosphate - Gamma Wave (Drumstep)

Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 7:06 pm
by FloyMaloy
there are definitely places where it sounds flat. i use a bit this http://www.audiodamage.com/downloads/pr ... pid=ADF002 for compression on drums- try it with yours, it's free. potential for a banger if you can bring it alive.. hope this helps. i'm not great for advice generally, but am good at spotting a good finished product- except with my own stuff..

Re: Triphosphate - Gamma Wave (Drumstep)

Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 7:11 pm
by TRaffikz
Hey Triphopsphate!! Funking like the track mate! Great vibe and energy on the whole! Realle dope melodies as well.
On a technical level, the track is less perfect, but your ideas seem to compensate that. Mix could be a little tighter imo, and your kick and snare sound a bit overcompressed, but that might be taste (i like drum samples with some texture)... Snare could use some more top end as well...

Overall, i think its very cool! Keep going!

Re: Triphosphate - Gamma Wave (Drumstep)

Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 7:53 pm
by Triphosphate
Thanks a mil guys, I think I'm gonna spend all next week tightening this one up, probably gonna do the percussion all over again to be honest. I've had a bunch of different approaches in my head for livening this one up.

Re: Triphosphate - Gamma Wave (Drumstep)

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 5:26 pm
by Shaion
Seems to lack a bit in the low end, actually.

And the snare should need a bit more space, it might be overcompression, but I'd actually check the EQ first. Give it a bit more of that 'snap' in the high end.

Composition-wise, it's a great track, absolutely nothing to complain about there.

Keep up the great work!