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AirRake Lascivious [borgorish]

Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 9:59 pm
by AirRake
Hey waddup guys, new kinda style that ended up happening with this track, kinda sounds like borgore i guess. if you don't think so i can understand
Looking for some criticism or feedback, because my stuff hasn't been getting too many listens lately. Maybe you guys can help me out ;)
anyways, hope you enjoy, peace guys

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Re: AirRake Lascivious [borgorish]

Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 10:54 pm
by Blinks
sounds like "complextro" which is more like skrillex, imo. I'd say just get some structure to your tune instead of just constant random noises, you can put that in for your "drop". just my opinion! love your drums though!

Re: AirRake Lascivious [borgorish]

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 12:07 am
by AirRake
hey thanks man! haha i can definitely see what you mean with the structure, its kind of a long drop with no break in it. It was more of a way for me to experiment with all my sounds cause i think they're kind of unique and fun sounding lol
peace man

Re: AirRake Lascivious [borgorish]

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 1:50 am
by Mastex
I thought it was good a lot of micro editing, sounds a little more like skrillex or crispy, but other than that i think you only need to pick more harmonizing chords for the paino in the beginning. Keep it up.

Re: AirRake Lascivious [borgorish]

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 2:21 am
by Anakratis
Blinks wrote:sounds like "complextro" which is more like skrillex, imo. I'd say just get some structure to your tune instead of just constant random noises, you can put that in for your "drop". just my opinion! love your drums though!
I have nothing else to say. What Blinks said I absolutely agree with. The sounds all seem like a block of random cheese. I like it, but there's no break. There needs to be a smooth moment, build up, and HUGE DROP. :h:

Re: AirRake Lascivious [borgorish]

Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 5:29 pm
by AirRake
thanks for the feedback guys! it helps alot