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I'm really sorry dude, I really don't want to sound like a douche, but you didn't even come CLOSE to lining up the a Capella properly. Like at all. Which is a crying shame cause the instrumentation you did where the vocals aren't playing isn't half bad. But you really need to try again on the vocals. And I laughed out loud at the modern warfare "let's do it"

Nah it's good that you're telling me that. I've listened to it about 30 times so it sounds fluid to me.

Everything seems so.... off. O_____o

It's like... Absolutely everything had a different tempo there. Haven't heard a cacophony like this since... Never, I think. Even the LFOs of the drop seem off-beat.

I don't mean to offend, but... You really have some catching up to do on basic music theory and composition.

Yeah I've never done any music theory or anything like that which probably noticed.

Yeah, well... However unimportant it may seem, maybe especially in electronic genres, I can assure you, it's just as important, whether you're composing filthy basslines or a violin solo.

Once you understand even the very basics, you'll begin to make... A LOT more sense in your music.

All the best, man!