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InvictUS - Reverberate/Death Sentence/Birdy Shelter
Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 2:29 am
by InvictUSNation
Re: InvictUS - 3 tracks need feedback please!!
Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 2:46 am
by nylle
only really liked the 2nd track...pretty cool electro tune you got there
the dubstep ones are fine i guess but they seem to be lacking in a sub bass. im hearing mostly mids
in the first track, death sentence, your wobble bass thing is conflicting with your trance arpegio synth thing
kinda got a headache listening x.x
Re: InvictUS - 3 tracks need feedback please!!
Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 2:49 am
by KZetDub
Death Sentence - Pretty decent track, the lead gets a little bit boring after a while, dont be afraid to mute it in the second verse and just keep the wobble in there. Also the wobble in the second verse goes out of sync in various spots, could try to fix that - its pretty important in dubstep imo : ) I definitely like the samples you used at 0:55 tho. Some work on mastering wouldn't hurt either, your snare seems to be clipping right before the second verse. One other thing is your kick drum, see, I like your snare, its pretty fat, but the kick needs more love.
Reverberate - I love your side chain, its pretty awesome and fits very nicely. Its not my sort of music so I cant really say much about anything else. Sounds pretty decent to me. 3:00 that transition needs a bridge, a hook, if you know what I mean.
Birdy Shelter remix - considering the wobble you used in the first part the drums definitely need to be a lot fatter. The second verse is fine tho, wouldnt even need to boost the drums. Pretty decent work mate : )
And totally agree with nylle there
nylle wrote:... lacking in a sub bass. im hearing mostly mids
Re: InvictUS - 3 tracks need feedback please!!
Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 2:55 am
by InvictUSNation
Awesome, thanks to both of you for the input!