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This is a small Dubstep song i made.
This is the first one i've made, and i don't know wheter it's good or bad, so i hope to get some constructive criticism.
(The voice is from killswitch engages singer, he said that in a interview, though i should mention it)

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And this is my second song, which i think is much better (but i need your opinion!)

Feel free to say whatever is good and bad with the songs

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yeah your right the second one is better. The bass synth is a little harsh, try using a little less distortion, instead try being creative with all the different knobs in your vst. Hope that helps. Come and check out my Soundcloud always happy to give advice. Leave some comments.

Ya know what man. there are so many different sub-genres of electric music its too much to try and confine yourself to what others think your music is. It's based on what you want from your sound. To me it sounds like you're goin for the more old school dubstep sound with the first song. The grimey down n dirty slowstyle Dubstep. Im pretty new to this Dubstep stuff but i've been producin music both electronic and in a band since i was 13. the only thing i can think of is to add a lil bit more synth or layers to your sound to get that complexity if thats what your goin after.

Thanks for the feedback
I might try to create a new song following you're advices

if it were me, i would probably use more crashes, and switch up the sounds more and use a louder kick. but you've got a lot of really good ideas! good job hope to hear more

I made a new song, hopefully you'll like it
I focused alot more on the drums and tried to follow your advices.

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Keep giving constructive criticism