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Hello everyone...I am trying to get some feedback on the song i am workin on so i uploaded it to soundcloud..I have been producing for 6 months now so i am no expert by any means. But considering 4 months ago i couldnt even put together a drum pattern, i think i am moving along nicely. Anyways dont be afraid to tell me where it lacks. thats how u get better right. If everyone told me that the tune was awesome then it wouldnt do me no good. Anyways thanks a bunch and here it is.....

http://soundcloud.com/beeeeeeeen/can-you-get-away/