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Robert Holmes- Tomahawk (intelligent dub)
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 4:46 pm
by Robert Holmes
Please check it out, Ill listen to and comment on everyones tracks that do the same for me.
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Re: Robert Holmes- Tomahawk (intelligent dub)
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 10:34 pm
by NiBirucollision
tight as hell dude, sick track
Re: Robert Holmes- Tomahawk (intelligent dub)
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 11:10 pm
by LifeOfCows
I love the abstract sounds! Now, for some feedback.
Positive:
-It is awesomely structured.
-Epic sounds
-Good Balanced Bass
-Mastered Well
Negative:
- at around 1:06ish, the plain wobble slightly drowns out the rest of the music, I don't really like that.
-Isn't extremely catchy, but has a lot of potential if worked on more.
This is my opinion! So, no hate!
Re: Robert Holmes- Tomahawk (intelligent dub)
Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2011 2:21 am
by Robert Holmes
Thanks for the feedback
Lifeofcows:
I hear what your saying at 1:06, I was trying to fade out the piano and have the bass take over but its all a little too much. Trying to put a demo album together and thought this would make a good lead off track...what would make it more catchy?
Nibirucollision:
thanks brotha.
It def needs some more work, I think the pizzacato hits could be louder and I gotta figure out that piano/bass section but for a rough copy that I banged out in two hours this morning Im really happy with it. It was one ofthose tracks where I heard a sample instrument and the whole song just came together.