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Jackknife - Set Blasters To Kill (dubstep/wtfstep)

Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 8:20 pm
by Jackknife
Another track I was working on prior to the collapse of civilization, I mean my computer, finished it up yesterday, still considering it a work in progress, all feedback is greatly appreciated and of course feedback for feedback! :4:

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Re: Jackknife - Set Blasters To Kill (dubstep/wtfstep)

Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 9:14 pm
by pixelscum
The melodies and drum patterns all work very well! I'd just work on perfecting the individual sounds.
Some sound a bit thin, try layering them some more. Maybe add a couple of subtle distortions, some verbs and other fx to the synths.
Maybe change the snare, it sounds quity hissy. I'd love to hear a little more punch.

Good job though, I like the style and there's nothing wrong with the composition, just the individual sounds need some work.

Re: Jackknife - Set Blasters To Kill (dubstep/wtfstep)

Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 9:23 pm
by Jackknife
Dope thank you very much for the feedback :D

Re: Jackknife - Set Blasters To Kill (dubstep/wtfstep)

Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 9:25 pm
by paradigm001
your synths sound good their just not even in the beginning, maybee if you ran them all through a compressor that would even them out, thats what I had to do. Keep the sub on a different channel. A couple sounds stick out but thats allright, your gettin the hang of it. Keep it up!

Re: Jackknife - Set Blasters To Kill (dubstep/wtfstep)

Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 9:31 pm
by Jackknife
Oh yeah that's cause I had a volume control automation making them louder, it was originally a 16 bar intro thanks for poiting it out i'll take it out :P Thanks for the feedback man, I really appreciate it :]

Re: Jackknife - Set Blasters To Kill (dubstep/wtfstep)

Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 4:19 am
by Hysterikz
Wow, I love your bass synth, however it could use a little more sub imo, though that sound might have been what you were going for. Although I do think that you should maybe put in another synth in the background or maybe add in some FX, it just sounded a little dry. I still love it, and atleast it's just a WIP, you can still improve it!

Re: Jackknife - Set Blasters To Kill (dubstep/wtfstep)

Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 6:51 am
by paradigm001
Like your bass synth. You need more of that.