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ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (Filth/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 7:48 am
by ReachZenith
Soundcloud

This is my newest song/WIP. Trying out some new drum packs. Let me know your thoughts and what I might be able to do to make it better! If you give me feedback, I'll return the favor. Just post a link to your thread!

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (WIP/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 7:53 am
by Electric_Head
I`ll check it out this evening

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (WIP/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 7:55 am
by ReachZenith
Thanks, and yeah I am re-uploading it...it was a bit quite.

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (WIP/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 11:02 am
by Refuzed
on the bass sonud when it first drops i think you need to up the amp attack as it just knida hits and is like, uh, what happened here. if you know what i mean. although i'm expecting a drop it doesn't really feel like its dropped as such. some very nice ideas in here though

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (WIP/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 11:09 am
by ReachZenith
Hmm I see what you mean, thanks for the heads up. I'll look into that!! Have anything you want me to check out?

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (WIP/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 11:13 am
by Refuzed
maybe something simple like a crash to emphasise the drop could work quite well

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (WIP/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 7:02 pm
by ReachZenith
I updated he track a bit, made it sounds a bit bigger, and added some new sounds. Check it out, hit me with some feedback and I'll return the favor. Also it's a FREE 320!!

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (Filth/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 10:31 pm
by ReachZenith
Need more thoughts.

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (Filth/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2011 1:22 am
by ReachZenith
Bump?

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (Filth/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2011 2:39 am
by Astrobear
On the strings section, if you automate the transients I think it will sound more natural. Musicians perform their instruments with character and you want to try to mimick that in your productions.

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (Filth/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2011 3:14 am
by elyhess
yeah i feel like that first drop theres just too much rumbling bass, almost like an earthquake, i havent really read what everyone else said, and im not really sure how you could fix this. other than that though, solid track mate!

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (Filth/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2011 3:23 am
by ReachZenith
Thanks guys I'll look into both of those things. The rumble is a little bit harder to tweak because of the samples that I used. I might layer and eq some stuff out. @Astrobear what should I automate about it? The volume? so it solo decreases or what?

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (Filth/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2011 4:46 am
by ReachZenith
Just updated the track a bit more!

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (Filth/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2011 9:17 am
by Electric_Head
it had a very nice intro, cool synths and pads.
I didn`t enjoy the drop however.
The midrange sounds didn`t sound good to me but I`m not a fan of that style.
I also wasn`t a huge fan of the synth line that plays in the background.
I liked the industrial concept but it sounded too noisy and unstructured to me.
Maybe stick to the industrial sound but focus more on the background ambience.

Re: ReachZenith - Rapid Exposure (Filth/Heavy/Industrial)

Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2011 9:30 am
by ReachZenith
I'll look into that, thanks for the heads up!