This is my 4th track, trying to make each one better and better, taking all the constructive feedback and applying it. I hope you all like this!!!
Re: Tone Smiff - Optimus Battle[dubstep]
Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 3:23 pm
by ToneSmiff
just a lil bump
Re: Tone Smiff - Optimus Battle[dubstep]
Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 4:11 am
by highgain
Intro is very cool loving the breakbeat feel of the drums hiphop is always cool, are they chopped off of one?
At around :30 where you have a breakdown try taking more elements out I felt like the track was too busy and didnt lead me enough
Also when your drop comes in try using the samples / sounds from the intro as things to microsample into instead of playing over top of your bass sucking tons of frequencies that could be used for further facemelting.
Also that Little Arp at 2:44 totally caught my attention its just a small bit but it caught my ears dunno why.
Just my thoughts
I'll be checking out your other stuff now always nice to hear other new producers, Hope some of these give you further creative ideas to work off and try out... peace
Re: Tone Smiff - Optimus Battle[dubstep]
Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 1:16 am
by ToneSmiff
sent ya a pm but wanted to say thank you for the feedback as well!