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Hair - Watch yourself (Deep/Dark)

Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2011 3:36 pm
by hair
Soundcloud

Hi everyone let me know what you think o this please ive not really tried stuff like this before so any feedback would be helpfull

Thanks :)

Re: Hair - Watch yourself (Deep/Dark)

Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2011 8:25 pm
by jeanblanc
I like the atmosphere that you've built, there's a definite sense of menace to the track, although it did become a bit repetitive. Could be improved a lot by bringing in new elements later on in the track I think. Perhaps a new melody/instrument would work well, but it's certainly something worth building on, keep it up.

Re: Hair - Watch yourself (Deep/Dark)

Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 11:42 am
by hair
thanks mate i'll look at adding a few things in then :) .

Re: Hair - Watch yourself (Deep/Dark)

Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 11:00 pm
by hair
Bump :)

Re: Hair - Watch yourself (Deep/Dark)

Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2011 2:45 am
by wizeguy
Sounding pretty good, yea maybe add some melody/nice hook... reckon some sorta delayed instrument could possibly sound cool...?

Re: Hair - Watch yourself (Deep/Dark)

Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 8:14 pm
by hair
Cheers man I've got a couple tracks I'm working on now so I'll keep what you said in mind :)

Re: Hair - Watch yourself (Deep/Dark)

Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 8:22 pm
by vyvyan
Hi,

That's right, there is a very good basis, but to my ears it's missiong something, even for a minimal track. May be missing of some pads to give some deeper atmosphere, even a bass pad would be nice, for example during the break... and it would keep the deep and minimal atmosphere!

Good work!

May you comment also?
http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=230530

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Re: Hair - Watch yourself (Deep/Dark)

Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2012 10:43 am
by hair
thanks man i can see what you mean with the break tbh i'll look at adding soething and see how it works.
thanks