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This track needs a lot of working on, only took me a few hours to finish, so it's pretty rushed. There's probably a lot of mistakes that I haven't noticed, so I need you guys to help me out!:D
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Whereas this one is pretty tight. Me and my brother spent too many hours on this. I don't think there's much to improve on, but I just need some more experienced ears to help!
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I hope you guys can help. Cheers.

so obviously it shows the more time you put in the better, and so I will not give you feedback on the first. The second however, is quite nice. The melody is pleasant, not too cheesy, though the really high pitched sound is a bit piercing. The drums arranged with the bass and melody are nice. Your bass sounds could use more development, ie movement, layers, etc...I can see it being a banging glitch track too!