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Just made a new track, experimenting with some new sounds i made. I Still dont have a set of monitors but that should be sorted in a few weeks now, fingers crossed.
Anyway just wanted some feedback on what i could do to make this track better/sound a bit nicer

I feel like im getting a little bit better every time i make a track, i know they all sound a bit crap but hopefully i will make something decent soon.
This is the track anyway:

http://soundcloud.com/twigge/error

Cheers for any feedback

I like the noises. Not sure what you could do, I'm learning/teaching myself too lol. I liked your track: Dealer. Check out my stuff?

Cheers mate appreciate it, yeah will check out your tracks now man no problem

Anyone else got any feedback on what could make it better?

Would be a big step, i guess, to give a better kick or add compression to it so it gets stronger and support the rythm. The switch beetwin the 2 dubstep sound is interesting. And more volume in general, compression/limiter on the master should take this a step further