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Paul Dymond - Levs

Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2012 2:54 pm
by paul2801
Soundcloud

Any feedback appreciated

Thanks :)

Re: Paul Dymond - Levs

Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 9:17 am
by wub
Really like the 8-bit intro you've got going on. The kick does overwhelm it a bit when it hits though. Not liking the mid range bass that comes in, the programming of it gets very reptitive, and it further drowns out the 8-bit melody. Filtering on the melody is nice on the break.

Overall, some good sounds but the whole tune feel very loopy - maybe change the arrangement a little in the second half to provide some variation, and switch up the drum programming to change the sense of movement.

Re: Paul Dymond - Levs

Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 9:25 am
by Riddles
really dont like the midrange, dominates the cool 8-bit thing youve got going on and means the sub bass doesnt come through clearly. up to the 27 sec drop i was really enjoying it.
The break kinda just appears and doesnt flow too well, you could kinda lead into it a bit.
Oh and youre percussion is a bit loud. I like the ideas a lot but im not a fan of the almost screechy midrange on it.

Re: Paul Dymond - Levs

Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 5:11 pm
by paul2801
Cheers for the feedback, much appreciated