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				TripNotic- Magic Potion (cyber bass)
				Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:47 am
				by TripNotic
				Soundcloud
i would really appreciate any feedback
 
			 
			
					
				Re: TripNotic- Magic Potion (cyber bass)
				Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 5:07 am
				by WhiteApple
				really need some work.
snare need less reverb, especially in lows
synth are tiring, too loud (make drums inaudible), not-organized, seems there no effort on the sound design.
whole track needs structure.
need mixdowns.
the track just feels like random sound poping from nowhere.
not trying to be mean, just trying to help.
			 
			
					
				Re: TripNotic- Magic Potion (cyber bass)
				Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 3:52 pm
				by TripNotic
				i appreciate the feedback got to hear it from somebody thats why i post tracks on here
			 
			
					
				Re: TripNotic- Magic Potion (cyber bass)
				Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 5:24 pm
				by vyvyan
				Hi,
Not my style, but I recognize it is not bad. Maybe a little bit too messy. I think some "jumpy tics" could give some nice rythm.
In terms of mastering it needs some work, but this is secondary.
Nice work!
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				Re: TripNotic- Magic Potion (cyber bass)
				Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 5:37 pm
				by TripNotic
				goood idea i think i kno what your talking about do you mean like a metronome ? during the random little stringy melodys?
			 
			
					
				Re: TripNotic- Magic Potion (cyber bass)
				Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 5:44 pm
				by vyvyan
				such as at 1:16 and 1:19 approx.
Something to give some more rythm and to give some "lightness" to your track!
Listen to what I have on my track "inside" below, from 1.02 you can understand what I mean.
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				Re: TripNotic- Magic Potion (cyber bass)
				Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 8:34 pm
				by TripNotic
				i see what your saying i get carried away with wobbles sometimes haha