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Trainwreck [Dubstep/trance/glitch]

Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2012 9:59 pm
by DemonShift
Just finished the first song I would really even call dubstep xD Feedback always appreciated :) Soundcloud

Re: Trainwreck [Dubstep/trance/glitch]

Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2012 10:02 pm
by baseband
the title is very accurate

Re: Trainwreck [Dubstep/trance/glitch]

Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2012 10:16 pm
by DemonShift
baseband wrote:the title is very accurate
:z: thank you for your input! :6: wanna tell me how to improve now? :roll:

Re: Trainwreck [Dubstep/trance/glitch]

Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2012 2:08 am
by Brothulhu
DemonShift wrote: :z: thank you for your input! :6: wanna tell me how to improve now? :roll:
Arrangement. Your track is just one big block with loads of ideas in it. Listen to other people's tracks and see how they are structured they aren't just one block of ideas they have sections like intro - breakdown - build up - drop A - bridge - drop B - breakdown - build up - drop C - bridge - drop D - outro for example. Dont throw all your ideas in from start to finish, try gradually introducing them and stripping them away throughout the track.

Re: Trainwreck [Dubstep/trance/glitch]

Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2012 2:40 am
by DemonShift
Brothulhu wrote:
DemonShift wrote: :z: thank you for your input! :6: wanna tell me how to improve now? :roll:
Arrangement. Your track is just one big block with loads of ideas in it. Listen to other people's tracks and see how they are structured they aren't just one block of ideas they have sections like intro - breakdown - build up - drop A - bridge - drop B - breakdown - build up - drop C - bridge - drop D - outro for example. Dont throw all your ideas in from start to finish, try gradually introducing them and stripping them away throughout the track.
Thank you xD This is the kinda thing i wanted to read.

Re: Trainwreck [Dubstep/trance/glitch]

Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2012 9:36 pm
by Only
It is kind of a noise at the moment I'm going to be honest but it definitely has potential because you have some great ideas in agreement with Brothulhu.