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I've been working on my first dub track. As soon as I aquired production software I created "The End V1." Only about 2 hours of time was put into it. 45 mintues of tweaking came with the result of "The End V2." I have just obtained massive and mini mog, but they aren't used in the song. I'm not sure what to do from here for the next tweak so I'd like some opinions. Let me know what you think of the song as it is, then some suggestive critisism if you don't mind.

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Thanks Guys.

Melody is good but your synth sound is not so good.
NEEDS MORE BASS
BASS BASS BASS
THERE IS NEVER ENOUGH BASS

Yeah, I agree with the other guy, the synth sounds funny.

Nice drums, I really like the kicks. Nice n' punchy.

The sounds really start to mess with me after a while, and the bass is ok.

Pretty nice track over-all.

Mind checking out my new track?
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=244113