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Mr. President - Tapika

PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHERE I CAN IMPROVE ON THIS TRACK.

Give me FEEDBACK AND COMMENT PLEASE!!

The build up is actually good- which is something not a lot get right. however, the Drop is simply not kicking enough. i think its the drums, they need more clash during the drop. Perhaps experiment with some hats and place some Crashes/open hats to give it more oomph.

Otherwise its cool.

The bassline is cool but I Lol'd at the stock FL studio drums

yay someone found modern talking

This is nothing like borgore... Not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing -_-

its a good start it just seems kinda repetitive and the drums need some beef like others have said,

but good job on the talking bass

download some samples. watch youtube vids, read tutorials, experiment with software. sit on this forum. continue to impress your friends because you make dubstep.

Not horribly bad. But it isn't something I'll listen to on my own time either.. You have potential that I can see cuz my shit sounded like that when I was starting off. You have structure, rhythm, and timing down. It's hella repetitive etc. but that's okay for now I guess.

The style sounds more like Eptic/Habstrakt but a hundred steps down from their production quality. So a pretty much noob version of them.

Keep at it dude

i would like to hear this with some more work on layering/compressing the drums and getting more bass than modern talking on the bassline.