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First of HI. Ive been reading many posts on here for couple of months now and i decided to finally make dubstep.

Here is a track that i started to mess with. The first version has a Flux bass to it and i wast really digging it.

The second version i made has heavy dark bass and really liking it.

So i would really like some feedback and some advice. Cheers!

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The v2 is the one im currently working on
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yay no one cares to look at this

Dude, i listened to the first one and didn't think much to it, but I clicked play on the second and it blew me away

I'll talk about the second track here, as It's the one I think you should continue with

It was a bit loud in some places and quieter in others, but I was really digging how the sample about parental discretion stood out over the rest of it, although it did come on a bit loud. The sample was a wicked idea though haha Also, I think you should change the build up a little bit imo, the kicks start and it gets you nodding your head to the rhythm, but then it loses rhythm as the white noise begins to overpower it and the sample starts.

Yeah the first one was a bit boring and was pretty much just a buzzzzz changing in pitch, but with the second one I reckon you have something here. Please, continue with it!

Thank you so much for the feedback! Yeah my mixing is bad. I have to work with blown headphones and a stereo that has to much bass boost. But again thanks for the feedback. Il try to fix my errors. Cheers!

No worries mate, I like helping people, especially if it helps create something awesome ^_^

Also, would it be cheeky to ask if you could give some feedback on my track? I've made a thread in the feedback forum, and i'd like as much feedback on my stuff as possible