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Mowtarc - Scary Ponies
Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 5:59 pm
by Mowtarc
Hi, this is my first post on dsf so hopefully done it right.
Would love to get some feedback on my stuff. All thoughts good or bad needed badly, as thoughts are hard to come by in mid wales.
Thanks alot.
Soundcloud
Re: Mowtarc - Scary Ponies
Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 8:53 pm
by Elektrastallion
The tempo should be speed up some.
Re: Mowtarc - Scary Ponies
Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 10:19 pm
by wubluv
The intro bassline is really deep, though you tease us with the intro beat/bassline too much... I feel like you take too long to get to the drop. After the drop, I'm wondering where the awesome bassline went. The deep revving up and down sound was fun.
In general, I'd rethink how you've organized things. I have a hard time seeing where you go from idea to idea. There are a lot of interesting phrases, beats and snippets here. Maybe two or three songs' worth. It was more focused for awhile after the second drop, I noticed.
Maybe also cut the running time?
I did really like the driving feeling of the song.
Re: Mowtarc - Scary Ponies
Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2012 8:39 pm
by Mowtarc
Nice one wubluv. Real good to get some decent feedback. Thanks alot
Re: Mowtarc - Scary Ponies
Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:46 am
by Mowtarc
I'd love someone more feedback please guys...