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updated version on youtube:
http://youtu.be/TUeOZAaNleo?hd=1

I listened to the youtube version. The lyrics are good. The vocal gets swamped out too much though. You need to compensate for the breakdown, which completely overpowers the vocals. Nice, solid beats. Good chord progressions on the lower mood track. The drop at 1:54 was cool, tho maybe punch it up even more? The lyrics kind of run out of steam here, too. The outro came too quickly, you have room to expand the song. Nice and tough sound overall...

wubluv wrote:I listened to the youtube version. The lyrics are good. The vocal gets swamped out too much though. You need to compensate for the breakdown, which completely overpowers the vocals. Nice, solid beats. Good chord progressions on the lower mood track. The drop at 1:54 was cool, tho maybe punch it up even more? The lyrics kind of run out of steam here, too. The outro came too quickly, you have room to expand the song. Nice and tough sound overall...

Thanks alot!

Sorry, but i don't understand what you mean with "swamped out"? Does it sound like it is not a part of the whole thing? Or does it interfere with something?
You mean i should build up the breakdown? Would be very kind if you could describe it in other words.

Probably need some decent studio audio speakers/hardware after all.

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