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hi ive just started making dubstep after making dnb for a couple of years. tell me wot u think of this chune ive started.

grim

I tell ya... I am kinda feelin the electro style cowbell action.

whatever that spacey sound is kinda gets annoying after the beat initially drops... maybe even before then. focus on what you got there, and remove that tripped out sound.

in fact, you can eliminate that entire first 45 seconds... start it with that vocal sample. that spacey pad noise really gave me a headache--no joke.

once it drops, I feel the serious bass pressure... really starts to pick up right about the end of this track. in my opinion, the first 45 is the worst, the last 45 is the best... I'd build on the last half... the space ship shit has to go though man

do u mean the arpegiated synthy thing or that like swooping down noise

yea, the synth. that thing is like ahhhhhhhhhhhh

the downswoop is fine... the high pitch noise :-S

all i gotta say is puuuuulllluuup tune-

heard that bass line in a a different tune, sounds like its been chopped and sped up

its ripped from kraftwerk ffs!