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Really need feedback on this, WastelanDUB- Raw ideas

Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 3:56 pm
by WastelanDUB
Any feedback would be appreciated, Thanks

Soundcloud

Re: Really need feedback on this, WastelanDUB- Raw ideas

Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 4:46 pm
by Fat Person Torturer
The melody doesn't sound in key and sometimes clashes with the bass. There's also no flow, the song doesnt have any direction and is pretty much the same lead with varying effects. You could probably refine this and make it something good if you added some structure and other melodies.

Re: Really need feedback on this, WastelanDUB- Raw ideas

Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 8:28 pm
by RATCUB
hmmmm

Re: Really need feedback on this, WastelanDUB- Raw ideas

Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 4:26 am
by WastelanDUB
RATCUB wrote:hmmmm

Hmmmm?

Re: Really need feedback on this, WastelanDUB- Raw ideas

Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 5:01 am
by eldoogle
Yeah, probs not in key, weird.

Re: Really need feedback on this, WastelanDUB- Raw ideas

Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 5:34 am
by WastelanDUB
Yeah I was thinking mabye thats why it feels a bit awkward.....