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Hey! Another feed 4 feed, I know.

Here's my track, I finished the song and released it as a free-be long ago, but I'm having second thoughts a little. Tell me what you think.

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shit needs to get REAL, this is bad...... an it appears your useing cloud killers to get self gratitude. If you want some honest feedback this really bad man. The synths sound horrible together, the massive saw wave sticks out like a sore thumb with its digital sound. I think you make atleast 50 tunes before you post up an expect people to get stoked on them..... to the slightest

I agree with hero.. none of this goes together... that flute is bad in here, But I think the breakdown was nice until the flute came in.

Well I don't use cloud killers, I comment on a lot of tracks and 1/3 of the people comment back. Though cloud killers is a nice tool for promotion/rating others tunes!

The flute needs to be revised, yes. But saying the track lacks everything is quite biased, it has rhythm. Now I will take the time to look over it. Thanks.

Got any tracks you want feedback on?

KillerKraut wrote:Well I don't use cloud killers, I comment on a lot of tracks and 1/3 of the people comment back. Though cloud killers is a nice tool for promotion/rating others tunes!

The flute needs to be revised, yes. But saying the track lacks everything is quite biased, it has rhythm. Now I will take the time to look over it. Thanks.

Got any tracks you want feedback on?

The track has rhythm cause the computer programmed that itself.. but yeah man, I wouldn't recommend posting everything you finish. I got loads of unfinished/finished tracks bad and good that I don't want to post cause I only want certain ones to be heard. Read some tutorials on the basics of making a song.

I appreciate the concern of my knowledge but I know what im doing. I do not want to sound like everyone else. I dont want to sound like DatsiK or Downlink or Excision. I like my own sound. But thats all I wanted, your opinions. If you didn't like this one check out System Failure, its in my sig. Thanks.

sup, unfortunately not really feeling the flute, also could of used a nice reverb on it!! your drums are a bit weak, you probably wanne layer a bit more.... andd wow heavy midrange came in, very unexpected and not really with the rest of the track I have to be honest.

Listening to system failure at the moment.. decent vocal and intro, building up is quite nice, the midrange coming in has a weird reverb and is pretty weak together with your drums again, you wanne focus on EQing/using the right effects on the right instruments most of all mate Once you got a better understanding of that down your tracks will improve hugely!

Right, not gunna base this on whhat others have said, literally clicked playy and opened up the quick reply option so you mayy find what I have to say has already been said:

The intro isn't terrible, bit lacking anyy real depth and atmos but i'll get over that.
Te flute doesn't sit at all with the track.
Over use of cyybals adds too muchh high end and makes it hard to focus onn te deeper elements.
That massive patch needs some work, too generic and not enough soul.

I see you are using cloudkillers for your tracks (I am making this assumption because: only famous, well known artists, generate that much interest in a tune without using cloud killers). Cloud killers is dangerous my friend. It can lead to a developing artist gaining a false sense of perspective on their productions and can cause you to become complacent with certain areas of your productions that may need more attention and not complacency.

It isn't the worst tune i've ever heard but, it is generic, uninspired and lacking certain qualities that make the genre what it is. Keep it up though man.

I can maybe see where your going with this one but honestly the mix of sounds is dreadful imo.

That flute just doesnt fit at all and is really grating on me. Drums are very bland and need more layers.

I would take delete everything and just work with that mid bass that as to me that the only bearable part.

You must have used cloudkillers on this one aswell which is not advised it gives you false information and confidence in tracks that are horrible
and im sorry but this is bad. Even Skream doesnt get the same amount to plays to comment that you get. But well done you have 50 pointless comments that mean nothing and if your think there opinions are more important than the one above you are very deluded my friend. I would prefer to have 5 plays and 1 comment that meant something rather than 50 comment of nice tune bro!!! Brostep is horrible imo but it can be done well but not like this. I would go and read some books about production you say that you know what your doing but i would disagree all your tracks on the same level. You dont have your own sound you just sound like every other bad brostep producer out there. Sorry to be harsh but i hope you listen.