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Stranger - Untitled (Deep, Dark, Dungeon)
Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 11:52 am
by ArrenMog
My latest tune, wanted to get some feedback on what everyone's feeling about it. Personally i think the midrange bass is sounding pretty spot on, i feel there is maybe a bit of cleaning up to be done so any suggestions on to make that better are welcome. One thing I am unsure as to whether i like it or not is the lead guitary sounding synth, i was unsure about it but people have been telling me it's good so i'm not sure whether to leave it in or change it.
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Also obviously any other feedback is welcome also,
Cheers!
Re: Stranger - Untitled (Deep, Dark, Dungeon)
Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 5:43 pm
by ArrenMog
Gunna have to give this a little bump as i would really like some feedback on this, i know it's starting to sound pretty good but i know its not perfect, just want some advice as what i'm doing wrong or what i could change the way i go about things, also ideas on structure would be useful as i do feel my tracks are a bit repetative.
Cheers!
Re: Stranger - Untitled (Deep, Dark, Dungeon)
Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 9:24 pm
by Greets
cool minimal style

Re: Stranger - Untitled (Deep, Dark, Dungeon)
Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 10:54 pm
by kudos
id suggest brightening up your hats, make the kick a bit more punchy also. the mid is cool. i can see myself playing this. cant comment on the sub as im listening through pc speakers
Re: Stranger - Untitled (Deep, Dark, Dungeon)
Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 11:00 pm
by dubby_rdam
Sick track, sounds really clean. I like the guitar hits during the track; not really fond of it in the intro... i suggest keeping it simple
Big business right there
Re: Stranger - Untitled (Deep, Dark, Dungeon)
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 12:23 pm
by SKIN E
nice track man, love the impact on snares you choose, feeling your samplee selection! hehe no this is a big track and definitely leave the guitar in, I think it is a very polished track, everything fits nice together, really feeling your stuff
I don't think it is repetitive.. but I always think that about my own tracks as well, some things to help this is put some more synths/samples in the background like pads and atmos that you feel fits with the track, but put it really soft like you can barely notice it, just hanging around in the background

And some subtle risers always help!