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Any feedback is welcome, haven't given it a proper mix, attempted to but failing. really battling with that kick.

safe

also the intro is the outro of another tune, that was totally intentional but i'll probably change it on the finished thing

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Cant really say i'm a fan of this new 'trap' stuff, but this isn't bad man, although it does kinda feel like one long build up to something fu*cking awesome, but then it never happens :/

Just my thoughts, but in the second half i'd perhaps make it a bit more 'mad', not to say you need to add loads more stuff going on, just spice things up a lil' bit

Keep it up mate

nice one blazer, good to see it can appeal to people that aren't necessarily into this whole style. I appreciate that a lot.

I know what you mean about the lack of 'madness' tho, it does feel like you said... a build up that doesn't really lead to much.
Im gonna take on board your feedback and work on that pronto

Safe for checking it

I dig this, kind reminds me of that one austin powers song, add an open hat in that second part and some hihat rolls, and if you did some panning fx with that echo voice would be dope, but its ill.

Blangk wrote:I dig this, kind reminds me of that one austin powers song, add an open hat in that second part and some hihat rolls, and if you did some panning fx with that echo voice would be dope, but its ill.

Safe Blangk,
yeah its Quincy Jones - soul bossa nova,
Also I've made some changes since and added the changes to the hats like you suggested, sounds a lot better, I'll up the full thing when im 100% happy with it.

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really just need to work on your transitions man, would have a lot more impact.
dropping volumes pullin a filter and setting some hits on the "drop" so to say.
i like the style, love wonky rap/trap beats.
keep on it man. for sure

oprs wrote:really just need to work on your transitions man, would have a lot more impact.
dropping volumes pullin a filter and setting some hits on the "drop" so to say.
i like the style, love wonky rap/trap beats.
keep on it man. for sure

I couldnt agree more mate, I've already started to incoorporate better transitions like you mentioned on my current works. I'll be sure to include this into the track in the op too.
nice one for checking it mate, im really in love with the sound at the minute too

safe

Dood both your tunes are madness, wouldn't be suprised if u ended up on some mad decent album or something some day

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for some criticism tho perhaps i would try to make the vocals shine thro more with some super quick echoe underneath or something to make them blast through them mix. and maybe just coat the whole track with a little more high end. again tho nice job.

Clodmeister wrote:Dood both your tunes are madness, wouldn't be suprised if u ended up on some mad decent album or something some day

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Clodmeister wrote:for some criticism tho perhaps i would try to make the vocals shine thro more with some super quick echoe underneath or something to make them blast through them mix. and maybe just coat the whole track with a little more high end. again tho nice job.

Safe Clodmeister, I would love to get the attention of Mad Decent sometime in the near future, I feel like they would really get my sound and direction, but I know I need to step it up loads more before I even get close to that kinda stuff. but seriously Safe brudda

so maybe some eq on the vox, a little peak somewhere and a vice versa dip on all the other conflicting sounds, add some delay too? cos i already got some goin on, maybe i could tweak it a lil more so it sits better.
and yeah man, agreed with the high end, I'll bare that in mind when finishing it off

peace

Sounds good man but needs a decent and much louder sub like all the other trap music has. Really goes well with the style.

I hear you ilv1, its almost too clean and not enough definition/clarity on its higher end. perhaps some well placed distortion on it like most other tunes have.

Safe

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