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JTreeZy - Goblinz

Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2012 9:26 pm
by JTreeZY
New Troll 2 inpired dubstep track.. If you havent seen troll 2 get high and watch that.. funiiest movie ever.. Feel free to harshly criticize

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Re: JTreeZy - Goblinz

Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2012 7:59 am
by wub
Didn't think I'd be liking this once when I heard the wobble, but it's not bad. Think some of the vocal samples are a bit overused, but it's fitting with the vibe of the tune you've got. Liking the automation on the wobble, keeps things moving nicely and not too static. Power down effects are nice too.

Beat could do with a switch up towards the latter half of the tune to keep it from being repetitive.

Re: JTreeZy - Goblinz

Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2012 10:40 pm
by JTreeZY
Thanks!

Re: JTreeZy - Goblinz

Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2012 10:42 pm
by Vacant
Diggin it man! I like the unique sound you got there. Keep up the good work dude :)

Re: JTreeZy - Goblinz

Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2012 10:42 pm
by Vacant
double post by accident

Re: JTreeZy - Goblinz

Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 2:32 am
by JTreeZY
Thanks

Re: JTreeZy - Goblinz

Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 2:38 am
by koncide
Love your bass sound. It's let down by the drums though, focus a bit more on your percussion man, try and get them punchier

Re: JTreeZy - Goblinz

Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 2:50 am
by Cutthoat
Alright, first thing I'm gonna say is that often times, Dubstep isn't about what you put in, it's about what you leave out. I don't remember where I heard that, but it was from a great producer and it's the best advice I can give you for this track. Your wobbles are unique as fuck and that's awesome, cause it shows you've got your own dope style. Also, big ups on making a troll2 Dubstep song, I've tried and failed a few times. Another critique is about your drums. That kick just annoys me, honestly. the sound... it's too intrusive. Especially in the intro. Give it more body and less penetration of the sub. Great work on the snare, but I would turn it up a bit. Give it more body too. Also, this song is begging for a breakdown section, but that's just my opinion and in the end, it's your tune so do what sounds good to you. I'm definitely a fan though.

Sounds a bit like Coki to me... he's one of my favorites. Did he inspire this tune at all?

Re: JTreeZy - Goblinz

Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2012 3:22 am
by JTreeZY
Cutthoat wrote:Alright, first thing I'm gonna say is that often times, Dubstep isn't about what you put in, it's about what you leave out. I don't remember where I heard that, but it was from a great producer and it's the best advice I can give you for this track. Your wobbles are unique as fuck and that's awesome, cause it shows you've got your own dope style. Also, big ups on making a troll2 Dubstep song, I've tried and failed a few times. Another critique is about your drums. That kick just annoys me, honestly. the sound... it's too intrusive. Especially in the intro. Give it more body and less penetration of the sub. Great work on the snare, but I would turn it up a bit. Give it more body too. Also, this song is begging for a breakdown section, but that's just my opinion and in the end, it's your tune so do what sounds good to you. I'm definitely a fan though.

Sounds a bit like Coki to me... he's one of my favorites. Did he inspire this tune at all?
Thanks a lot for the feedback. Thats the kinda stuff that really helps. I kinda noticed it had a bit of a coki vibe to it but I didnt go into it like that. If anything it was more inspired by suspect/stenchman cuz i've really been studying their use of the Malstrom synth. I've been practicing my production a lot this summer so im happy people can apreciate the sound im goin for but I know my production needs a lot of work. The good feedback helps me feel like i didnt waste my time this summer and critizism is always welcome