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LiveFomOurBassment - PwobZ
Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 11:02 am
by LivefromTheBassment
New Song New Name
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Re: LiveFomOurBassment - PwobZ
Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2012 9:19 am
by wub
Mixdown on this is quite messy, a lot of the elements are sounding flat and cheap for a lot of the time. That synth line at 2m12s is particular bad for this.
I'd suggest taking another look at the mixing on this altogether.
Re: LiveFomOurBassment - PwobZ
Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2012 9:05 am
by LivefromTheBassment
Thx from the tips
Re: LiveFomOurBassment - PwobZ
Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2012 9:31 am
by Electric_Head
I mirror everything wub has said.
No feeling to this either.
Very flat and unemotional.
Re: LiveFomOurBassment - PwobZ
Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 10:03 pm
by BBC
Honestly speaking... and i mean no disrespect, but you need to spend some time making sounds, then spend some time placing those sounds in an interesting arrangement, i dont not get a sense or rythem or anything, it feels like some kind of automated program made it. Stoked your making beats and everyone needs to start somewhere but take some time with each element to make it as awesome as possible before plunking it in. Keep it up / dont get discouraged / have fun with it cause its supposed to be fun. Sorry to shit on your work. Post some others and lets see your progression.
Re: LiveFomOurBassment - PwobZ
Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 10:27 pm
by Dustwyrm
I'm at work so can't listen to it at the moment, but I will check this out for you tonight Bassment, but from reading what others have said, make sure not to take any criticism to heart and let it get you down. It's important for everyone here to be straight forward so that you can truly progress. Keep making beats and learning and listening. Youtube and Google have a ton of tutorial based knowledge to acquire and you can even use it on an "learn-as-you-go" basis as you are creating your track. The possibilities are endless so don't sell yourself short. In conclusion, stay focused and keep at it brother
Re: LiveFomOurBassment - PwobZ
Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2012 2:29 pm
by LivefromTheBassment
@BBC Thanks ill post some new stuff soon I'm still learning and doing my best ;p
@Dustwyrm Thanks for the advice ill keep making music and we hopefully "learn-as-I-go"
