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popsync - ?!?! [chill, unfinished]
Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2012 9:45 pm
by popsync
Soundcloud
unfinished, but I would like to hear from you guys what is it missing
Re: popsync - ?!?! [chill, unfinished]
Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2012 9:13 am
by wub
Really like the first half of this tune, the chords have a real DeadMau5 vibe to them and are very nicely done. Warbling vocal gets a bit overused in places, maybe re-record it if you can and get some variation on the words being sung. Felt the drums were a little weaker than they could've been, but it compliments the vocal and melody well.
Overall a good piece. Vocal defninitely needs some work though, it's very loopy at the moment.
Re: popsync - ?!?! [chill, unfinished]
Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 3:35 pm
by popsync
wub wrote:Really like the first half of this tune, the chords have a real DeadMau5 vibe to them and are very nicely done. Warbling vocal gets a bit overused in places, maybe re-record it if you can and get some variation on the words being sung. Felt the drums were a little weaker than they could've been, but it compliments the vocal and melody well.
Overall a good piece. Vocal defninitely needs some work though, it's very loopy at the moment.
sure, will try to make the vocals more different, thanks for your review
more feedback, anyone?