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S.O.S.-Perfunctory (Dark, Kryptic Minds Style)
Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 5:03 pm
by Soul_Of_Seun
Soundcloud
So this is my newest tune. The Piano lead seems to work for me so I stuck with it. Thoughts?
Re: S.O.S.-Perfunctory (Dark, Kryptic Minds Style)
Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 2:45 pm
by Tordal
nice vibes!
kick is a little bit weak imo
percussion sounds really nice, esp. from 1:50 on
on the wobbles a little too much reverb, sits very low in the mix imo. could use a bit more presence
piano is dope, gives a really dark atmosphere
nice track tho!
Re: S.O.S.-Perfunctory (Dark, Kryptic Minds Style)
Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 3:41 pm
by kaiori breathe
The low end sounds kinda muddy to me, loads of sub on that kick but not very much of anything else on it, and yea, maybe a little too much reverb on those wobbles. Percussion is pretty nice though as Tordal said. The snare sounds a little dry to me, I think a more realistic sounding one might do a better job on this track. Overall it's not bad though, just nit picking really.
Re: S.O.S.-Perfunctory (Dark, Kryptic Minds Style)
Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 4:09 pm
by jaydot
Feeling this, as mentioned before the kick is weak though.
Re: S.O.S.-Perfunctory (Dark, Kryptic Minds Style)
Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 9:36 pm
by Soul_Of_Seun
Really appreciate the feedback all. You guys really make my tracks better.
Re: S.O.S.-Perfunctory (Dark, Kryptic Minds Style)
Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 11:15 am
by wub
Got the dungeon roller vibe, agree re; the kick being a bit too faint though.
Also the constant hi hat pattern has a bit of a robotic feel about it, could maybe benefit from some looser programming.