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I'm attempting to sell beats online and I will be posting examples of the beats on my youtube page. I was wondering if anyone could give me some feedback here if you feel this first beat is up to par?? In addition to that, if you have a large network or know rappers/artists interested in working with a producer like me I would give you a commission for setting that up.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gsdda5FxGm8