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First and Second song

Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2013 11:24 pm
by AutumnHOUR
Hey guys,
just a quick intro, this is my first post here obviously, and I haven't been producing music for long. I play drums in a touring metal band but thought I'd give this a go.
Any C&C would be greatly appreciated! Also, the vocal samples are pretty obviously ripped but I'm still learning and Im using that as my excuse haha

First
https://soundcloud.com/rrrgl/thestral

Second
https://soundcloud.com/rrrgl/illlllusionz

Thanks guys

Re: First and Second song

Posted: Fri Jul 12, 2013 12:24 am
by Z4LLEN
<soundcloud links added for convenience>

First,
Soundcloud
Awesome work. Good variation with the intro (and the entire song, really). Kept my attention nicely. I like the lack of a cliché kick drum build up. Made the drop more interesting, imo. Also, the snare is waayyyyy to soft.

Second,
Soundcloud
Again, nice variation. Good work. I do think the drop could use a little better mastering on this one. Some of the wobbles seem a little muddy.

Re: First and Second song

Posted: Fri Jul 12, 2013 10:16 am
by AutumnHOUR
Thanks for the feedback. For sure on the mastering, still messing around with that and learning it. Cheers