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Hey guys I'm new to trying to create music and i would love any feedback that i can get since im learning as i go. This is a track i was working on and i figured i'd post it and see what criticisms i could get.
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Also like I said I am new to everything so if you would like to check out the first 3 things i ut together just check my soundcloud profile there isn't much on there yet. https://soundcloud.com/bamfofficial

Thanks to all that look