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Optimus X - Machine[Dubstep/Drumstep]

Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2013 10:31 am
by Optimus_X
Hi guys ,
There's a new tune i made like 2 days ago. It's made only with FM Synths. So I wanna know what do you think of it and asking you for some feedback. Thanks ;)

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Re: Optimus X - Machine[Dubstep/Drumstep]

Posted: Tue Oct 15, 2013 8:26 am
by wub
Lots of midrange noises going on here, made it sound a little hectic at times. Felt the drums were getting a little lost under the cacophony at times.

Re: Optimus X - Machine[Dubstep/Drumstep]

Posted: Tue Oct 15, 2013 2:58 pm
by Optimus_X
Yoo thanks for the reply.
Well, I know for the midrange noises but the problem comes from my computer (only 2gb RAM) and I'm not very good at mastering :(.

Re: Optimus X - Machine[Dubstep/Drumstep]

Posted: Tue Oct 15, 2013 3:15 pm
by wub
Not sure why your computers RAM would affect how the tune sounds in terms of too many things going on at once?

Re: Optimus X - Machine[Dubstep/Drumstep]

Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 9:19 pm
by Optimus_X
Well actually i think that is my computer, because I can't really put all the things I want due to memory limit. At least that's what I think, but maybe it's just me that didn't tweaked sytrus well (FM is a bit complicated, need to be more precise).

And there aren't too many things going in, just an FM Bass :P.

Re: Optimus X - Machine[Dubstep/Drumstep]

Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2013 10:29 am
by rockonin
Like Wub said there's no definition in the drums.
Consider highpassing the bass more to make a little bit more room for the kick (also take a look at you sample choice if you have layered them)
The snare sounds weak as well (needs more punch). Personally i would use a high shelf eq on the high hats to add a little more top end to the track with a little reverb.
Use more variation in the transitions as well. The bass sounds great. Good work.

Re: Optimus X - Machine[Dubstep/Drumstep]

Posted: Wed Oct 30, 2013 1:50 pm
by Optimus_X
Thank you for your reply. I'll try to consider your advices for my next tracks :) (I don't really know if we can say that)