HAIKU KRU
Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:11 pm
DOES ANYONE ELSE; PROPERLY
APPRECIATE THIS, FORM OF
POEM?
APPRECIATE THIS, FORM OF
POEM?
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Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:15 pm
Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:19 pm
WHERE'S UR HAIKU THEN???? 
Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:22 pm
Kablammo is right.
I shall present my haiku.
Read it out loud please.
I shall present my haiku.
Read it out loud please.
Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:31 pm
As long as it is
seventeen syllables
the form is optional
these are often known as freeform or contemporary haiku
seventeen syllables
the form is optional
these are often known as freeform or contemporary haiku
Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:32 pm
No, I don't.
Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:39 pm
i can appreciate the good ones. but theyre kinda wack usually.like the jazz of poety to me. 
Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:04 pm
Whats wrong with normal poems?
im only saying that cause i dont understand haiku...
im only saying that cause i dont understand haiku...
Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:30 pm
GOOD EFFORTPhaelon wrote:Kablammo is right.
I shall present my haiku.
Read it out loud please.
Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 10:32 pm
Fi-i-i-i-ive
Sev-ev-ev-ev-ev-ev-ven
Fi-i-i-i-ive
Sev-ev-ev-ev-ev-ev-ven
Fi-i-i-i-ive
Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 12:00 am
Whats wrong with Jazz?Vonboyage wrote:Whats wrong with normal poems?
Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 12:01 am
ca'an tom where's your input bruz
Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 12:10 am
nothing wrong with it, but its all over the place. doesnt make sense to me. much like these kinds of poems. not that theyre all over the place, but they seem like words thrown together to attempt some kind of poem...like jazz is a bunch of music thrown together..Thomas wrote:Whats wrong with Jazz?Vonboyage wrote:Whats wrong with normal poems?
not that theres anything wrong with that..
Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 2:39 am
i think that jazz is
probably the least asian
musical format
probably the least asian
musical format
Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 3:10 am
maybe jazz is just too complex for you to understand.perkalerk215 wrote:nothing wrong with it, but its all over the place. doesnt make sense to me. much like these kinds of poems. not that theyre all over the place, but they seem like words thrown together to attempt some kind of poem...like jazz is a bunch of music thrown together..Thomas wrote:Whats wrong with Jazz?Vonboyage wrote:Whats wrong with normal poems?
not that theres anything wrong with that..
Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 1:08 pm
maybe you should stop creepin under other peoples namessri wrote:maybe jazz is just too complex for you to understand.perkalerk215 wrote:nothing wrong with it, but its all over the place. doesnt make sense to me. much like these kinds of poems. not that theyre all over the place, but they seem like words thrown together to attempt some kind of poem...like jazz is a bunch of music thrown together..Thomas wrote:Whats wrong with Jazz?Vonboyage wrote:Whats wrong with normal poems?
not that theres anything wrong with that..
and jazz just does nothing for me. has nothing to do with understanding it or not. just doesnt appeal to me..