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https://soundcloud.com/crypticdub/vape

there's the link. i'm really proud of this song, but I'm still pretty new at producing and would like to know what other people think i should improve on. thanks in advance.

Its pretty good. I personally like songs with a little more melody, and the midrange basses could use some messing around. The intro was pretty cool, but i dont know if a Cartman sample is the best choice for a deep Dubstep song :p

sounds good id suggest trying to structure you song more in the sense that the mid break is a third to long i think or somewhere there abouts . or maybe trying recombining your two basses at the end i always find it sound interesting if you say chope every other note out one bass line and replace it with your other one it can sound quite good overall though i love the filtering at the end and the increase in the modulation rate sounds dead good on the second drop!

I like the percussion work. The cartman sample threw me off though. It's got a nice rhythm to it. The bass is a bit in your face for my liking, try lowering the main bass level in the mix. The second part with the more dark basses is more to my liking. It feels like 2 different tracks. Other than that not bad.

Scrap the entire first half of the song, and if that second half is actually your production, keep that.