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Bonéz-Don't Dubtrip (Unmastered WIP) Produced At The Hotbox
Posted: Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:25 pm
by DjBonez
https://soundcloud.com/boneez/dont-dubt ... soundcloud][/soundcloud]
I would appreciate the Feedback
Thanks.
-Bonéz
Re: Bonéz-Don't Dubtrip (Unmastered WIP) Produced At The Hot
Posted: Tue Feb 04, 2014 3:31 am
by Dj_antmouth
The instrumental is reaally nice. But i think maybe you should work on the lyrics a little bit. Not to go all "racism police" on you, but from what i can tell your white, and the N-Word is a word us white folk really shouldn't be using
also the lyrics seem a little bit "Pussy-money-weed" if you get what i'm saying. Judging by the instrumentals i think maybe you should write a verse about floating away on a cloud with a fat spliff and a glass of some good ol' tanqueray and tonic. On this cloud you meet up with another cloud full of beautiful ladies, and you guys waste the day away massaging each other and basking in the warm rays of the sun