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Tallen - Yup! (Dubstep/Wonky?/140BPM)

Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2014 5:43 pm
by Tallen
Here is a tune I made this morning: https://soundcloud.com/tallen/tallen-yup

I appreciate any feedback, I will return the favor, so drop links!

Re: Tallen - Yup! (Dubstep/Wonky?/140BPM)

Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2014 8:37 pm
by wehlfest
I like the brief switch up at 1:08. But the yoi sound is pretty generic overall and has been done to death. It's like playing a G major chord on an acoustic guitar. By itself it is boring, but it a certain context or used in an original way, it can give it new life and sound fresh.

Could use some variation in the drums. Just my opinion.

Re: Tallen - Yup! (Dubstep/Wonky?/140BPM)

Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2014 8:51 pm
by Gannon211
Overall composition is good, got good flow and arrangement! But I'd agree the yoi is generic. I'm not knocking it though, great track. As I've said composition and arrangement is decent, but unfortunately uneducated people who don't appreciate music just want the sounds when that's not even half of what makes a great song! You'll get the bros who dig the yois and growls but try and be original(: However if you wanted that sound then this track is a success, congrats Soundcloud

Re: Tallen - Yup! (Dubstep/Wonky?/140BPM)

Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2014 9:20 pm
by Tallen
Thanks, homie(s)!

Re: Tallen - Yup! (Dubstep/Wonky?/140BPM)

Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2014 11:19 pm
by notoy
I dig it! Forgive me if I don't use the correct technical terms but I think a little more stereo on the yous would give it more appeal (duplicated, one slightly left, other slightly right, detune one a few notches). I like the arrangement though and would have gotten into it repeated with the yous chopped rather than a fadeout just after 2 min :) Nice tho, got a like from me.

Re: Tallen - Yup! (Dubstep/Wonky?/140BPM)

Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2014 6:07 pm
by Tallen
Thanks for the feed, m8s!