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Not a bad idea but very limited in it's overall execution.
What starts with some good ideas ends with the same ideas.
I understand it's only 2:17 but that is 2:17 of the same stab, same bassline,etc.

You need to focus on a bit of variation and atmosphere.

I do like the atmosphere and the mix however i do agree that it does lack some variety in its arrangment. Youre definitely on the right track though. Keep it up!