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Hey guys, this is a new track I made. I was wanting to try a new genre. I know this isn't dubstep but we're all music producers here nonetheless.

Please give me your opinions/criticism. Thanks!
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Seriously need to work on your production. There are so many overlapping frequencies, either that or its all just abit too loud. Have you tried sidechaining? There kick and snare are hardly audible.

Apart from production; songs nice, cool intro but abit weak melodically and constructively. Try to look at a similar genre and notice how they're constructing their song; when the drop hits, is there a bridge between verse and chorus etc.

If you're new to making music, then this is good stuff.

Poor bugger took his track down Wanted to listen to itt!