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Are these loops or something? It's really repetitive and it isn't all that exciting either. The individual sounds are nice, In particular the pads in the beginning. I just don't think they work together in this case. (Could all just be opinion, idk).

Also, the sub kick is too loud or too subby. Just look at how crazy big the waveform goes when it comes in. But yeah, I could see this working if you changed the drums and made it a little more ambient with less of that sub kick. Delays, reverb, rain, trains etc. All that goodstuff

I agree, it sounds very repetitive, and not very exciting. More atmosphere, like using reverb and delay. Also maybe add more musical sections, not the same two parts back and forth maybe; change it up a little more (or at least in a way thats more noticeable).

I re-worked and re-titled it.

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