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Got some time to breath during the holidays (funny that), so here's the finished version of "Unititled" I renamed purely because of the RasKitchen sample i found rummaging through my old hdd.

Feedback and tips appreciated.

I feel like the bass could be turned down a touch, but I'll let you guys be the judge of that.
I also wanted to put in a melody in there but I couldn't really think of a good instrument to toy with.

Edit:

Added a layered electric guitar melody to the second and last part of the drop, tell me watcha thinkin'!

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this is heavy but youre right needs something melodic.. some disgustingly crunchy, moody electric guitar riffs would sound baaaad on this one.

nice effort overall tho

Not bad at all but you need to add something to let it be interesting.
That's just a sub try with some arps or lead.

Awesome man. Love the bass line. I think the groove is there tbh. I would try to add some mid texture to your low end though. Something that could evolve throughout the tune.

Thanks guys, this is the feedback i'm lookin for! Will go back to work on this one as practice in a bit!

Cheers!

Update, here is a the new version of the track with a melody to accompany the bass.

It comes in after the first bridge, and progresses for the final drop in the tune.

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bump!

You're getting closer!! it still feels like theres something missing though. Bring out the high synth more while mastering and maybe at a second higher end synth to compliment the one you already have. It just needs more of a melody.