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Stikman - Pardoner

Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:17 pm
by stikman
New track after a few months off!

Soundcloud

Hope you like

Safe

Re: Stikman - Pardoner

Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:24 pm
by Fastworker
I would but a compressor on the speech from this dark soul caracter and work on the phaser so it variate a bit, and maybe cut some reverb of osward as well

Re: Stikman - Pardoner

Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:36 pm
by stikman
Fastworker wrote:I would but a compressor on the speech from this dark soul caracter and work on the phaser so it variate a bit, and maybe cut some reverb of osward as well

I was struggling big time with the vocal. It was either too flat or too much. Which was driving me bonkers as the wav rip had zero background noise. Ta for the feedback son :Q:

Re: Stikman - Pardoner

Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2015 5:42 pm
by Redoken
This track has nice ambiance but where's the drop?!

Re: Stikman - Pardoner

Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2015 12:26 am
by Soze
This is interesting. You need a sub to follow that lead sound, with a bit of LFO to give it movement. Also id say you need to layer up your drums as they sound flat atm.

Re: Stikman - Pardoner

Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2015 9:43 am
by stikman
Soze wrote:This is interesting. You need a sub to follow that lead sound, with a bit of LFO to give it movement. Also id say you need to layer up your drums as they sound flat atm.

Yeah man I thought that after listening to it back a few times. I thought it might get too messy in adding in more sub bass. Oh well maybe next time! Thanks for the feedback much appreciated

Re: Stikman - Pardoner

Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2015 9:45 am
by stikman
Redoken wrote:This track has nice ambiance but where's the drop?!

Haha near the end it goes a bit more grimey if that's what your after! Thanks for listening man

Re: Stikman - Pardoner

Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2015 11:23 pm
by foxox
stikman wrote:New track after a few months off!

Soundcloud

Hope you like

Safe
I like the sounds you have but I think you need more going on over the whole track, especially with the drums.

I think a lot of electric musicians tend to get into this a sort of "tunnel vision" with one pattern after the next, including myself. Try to add more to it that isn't part of a pattern necessarily but just in it's own little spot.