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This is alright, I would suggest that you have a heavier sub maybe without an LFO entirely to accompany the dark synth you have there like a foreground / background duo. I would also suggest that you turn down your main hat there, it's a bit loud.

Try changing up the pattern of your drums a bit more as well, maybe add in a shaker to keep things interesting.

Love the mafioso like sample ya got in there though, really adds to the atmosphere.

sample is good-vibe is nice- sweet

Hmm, I like it.
I just think that the sub is a bit "weak".
It's a nice song overall