Dubstepforum.com

Soundcloud

fb appreciated

bump

Not bad, I'd suggest havin that crunchy waterfall kinda sound modulated throughout at different points as a sort of gritty percussion, it's a bit loud as it is now and would flow much better that way I'd think.

Maybe give your panning shaker a bit more delay so it fades out gradually through both sides, and i would give your sub a bit more of a low end to give it more of a punch rather than a jagged cut through your tune. I'd also add in some more kicks to accompany your percussion,

I like the synth melody, but it could also be paced out a little better throughout the track, give it some subtle edits all the way through, maybe have it phase out and in to different patterns.

Keep at it!

it needs to be deeper ! lol. just add a sub bass that goes along with your current bass, then cut the super low end on what you currently have.... also maybe add some more texture to the bass that is currently there... The track has potential.

Yeah jaydot make it deeper and this will already make it much better. The ideas are very nice though!