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Let me know what you think!

Id take a 320 of that and play it at 140 really

Great ideas going on here, I would have liked to see more variation in the atmosphere/melody you got going on there, maybe add some more effects on it, throw in a smooth jazz sax or something as well to add more flavour.

definitely needs some variation especially in the melodies but good ideas represented

Yeah ill third some variation, and good ideas. But dont let it discourage you getting a good idea is half the battle, then arrangement.

As far as mix bring that pad down a bit like 10 db maybe more.
Look into structuring as well, most tracks move in 16 bar sections or 32.
your intro seems to be only 8 bars long unless you consider the next 24 your intro as well, but your kick has a good amount of sub bass and most people don't put sub in the intro.

Just a few things i think might help for over all structure, unless you wanna go make some crazy type stuff with no structure then forget everything i mention.

cheers man

Fastworker wrote:Id take a 320 of that and play it at 140 really

bumped it up to 140 while i was practicing mixing. sounds dope!

Graydon wrote:Great ideas going on here, I would have liked to see more variation in the atmosphere/melody you got going on there, maybe add some more effects on it, throw in a smooth jazz sax or something as well to add more flavour.

Hey thanks man, I'll try that sax idea!

chrondor wrote:definitely needs some variation especially in the melodies but good ideas represented

Thanks man much obliged!