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New track, develop it more or drop it?
Posted: Sat May 06, 2006 6:43 pm
by eventualdecline
Been working on this one for a while off and on. Kinda itchin to get it off my plate. Not too sure if I should work on it more to finish it up or move on.
What do you guys think?
Warning this is geared to be sub heavy, not for the PC speaker crew.
http://protean-carrier.com/audio/clips/suek.mp3
Posted: Sat May 06, 2006 6:51 pm
by docwra
Breaks in this r sick and the buildup is good to maybe a tad too long though. Can hardly hear no sub though man. Could do with some more sounds imo, like nasty bass hits.
Posted: Sat May 06, 2006 7:03 pm
by eventualdecline
Docwra wrote:Breaks in this r sick and the buildup is good to maybe a tad too long though. Can hardly hear no sub though man. Could do with some more sounds imo, like nasty bass hits.
Thanks for taking the time to check out the track. If I work on this one more I'm going to split the sub and over drive the high end to fill up space. I guess right now the frequency is really low to hear it on regular speakers. But it's there... it vibrates my heavy monitors across the table
Posted: Sat May 06, 2006 7:06 pm
by docwra
coolio.
Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 11:26 pm
by shonky
I think the drums sounded a bit busy, especially with so much echo on it. I think the problem with the sub is that it's all very well having the low end, but you need a bass part above the fundamental to hear, not just feel. Sounded good though, so keep at it.
Posted: Mon May 08, 2006 3:21 am
by excision
sounds pretty good man but yeah remember to have some bass notes above the actual bass that you have now. Add some more stuff to it aka finish it.
Also, its part of a producers job to learn when to keep going and finish something and when to scrap it. The people on here will always tell you what to fix because we dont know how good you are. YOU know how good you are and if you can truly make it into a sweet track, then do it.
Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 2:08 pm
by frostyljd
liking the track-good move youve done all the drums but you need 2-3 catchy samples which you put in there, a voice or a strange sound, something to jump out, raise the adrenaline and keep the track moving-also gives it a vibe and more catchy. drums seem good tho, just a bit empty on the top side of things
Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 3:09 pm
by ramadanman
the stuttery amen is really annoying me - just too raw. and the breaks do go all over the place. the piece needs space.
the atmosphere at the beginning was really promising though.
agreed with comments about bass too.