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track crit
Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 11:42 am
by 47
Hi
I would really appreciate your opinions on this track I'm just finishing..
http://www.glamrock-agency.com/47.mp3
Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 11:55 am
by blizzardmusic
Ouch!!!!!
This tune is sick!
Big ups!
Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 4:51 pm
by jade_monkey
Sounds really good to me! I would propose some slight changes...
I'd do a little bit less reverb on the snares and tighten them a little bit up (maybe layer a second a little bit distorted snare under it) and bring them to the foreground. Also i would work around with the first wobble, its a little bit dull as it sounds now. And I'd add a harmonic atmo in the background and I would use the distorted percussion from the beginning much more, it sounds interesting.
Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 1:04 pm
by 47
Thanks for the feedback! It's my first dubstep track so it's good to get pointers from the pros
I'll post back when I'll have changed the track,
thanks!
Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 1:29 pm
by defiance
SICK!
Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 11:08 pm
by kato!
Hey I really like it up to the point where the lfo modulated bass (I'm not saying the w word) plays on it's own, I don't think it works with that particular sound, maybe double up the line with different sounding synths, punching in every bar or two and a little atmos pad lying under it. As for the drums, I think a bit more attack on the kik and a slightly heavier snare, as in maybe layer an acoustic snare under that one, tune it in and adjust the envelope so it blends in. For a first effort, very impressive, keep it up.